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Monday, 13 February 2017

Walking to every night to find desire



                                Walking to every night to find desire 'Song'
I am walking to every night
i am thinking about my life,
Don't break,don't break my Golden dreams
Don't break.................

 I am sleeping to every mood,
I am listening to every Voice.
Don't make,Don't make me to wild
I am walking to every night
   i am thinking about my life,
Wanna fly to in the sky
just touchen to blue sky,

 Don't cut ,don't cut my Golden wings...............
Make strengthened just my desire,

 Don't pull,don't pull my flying legs.............
just wanna to cross the dark Nights

 I am child of that great guide
Wanna make world to light

 I am walking to every night
   i am thinking about my life.........................

 "Eklavya"                          
                                           


                                             
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11 comments:

  1. Dr. Vandana Sharma3 September 2017 at 12:47

    With hope and courage a human can do wonders and we should always be letting the birds of desires fly.............
    Nice composition.

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  2. Sweta sinha3 September 2017 at 13:18

    Beautiful song with full of hopeful golden dreams.very touchy👌

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  3. Harsh Wardhan Jog3 September 2017 at 13:25

    Good one

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  4. Pammi singh'tripti'3 September 2017 at 13:53


    nice one keep it up.

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  5. Sudha Devrani3 September 2017 at 14:27

    Wow!
    Very nice
    Hopeful golden dreams....

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  6. पुरुषोत्तम कुमार सिन्हा3 September 2017 at 14:55

    Resp Eklavya ji, Though English is an international language, i personally feel, Hindi has many brilliant facets to give real shape to our feelings in a most effective manner.
    Though, your effort is commendable, you are just too good at Hindi Poem in which you look orginal and remarkable. Hope for the best. Thanks....

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  7. पुरुषोत्तम कुमार सिन्हा3 September 2017 at 15:06

    Just look at, How beautiful is your poem in HINDI...

    प्रतिदिन टहलता हूँ मै रात में,
    सोचता हूँ अपने जीवन के हालात में,
    मत तोड़ना सपन मेरा,मत तोड़ना मेरा सपन,,,,

    We Love our HINDI...

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    1. 'एकलव्य'3 September 2017 at 17:08

      आदरणीय ,पुरुषोत्तम जी आपके विचार से मैं पूर्णतः सहमत हूँ और यह भी स्वीकार करता हूँ कि हम अपनी भावनाओं को जितना अच्छा हिंदी में व्यक्त कर सकते हैं उतना किसी अन्य भाषा शैली में नहीं। मुझे जानकर अत्यंत हर्ष हो रहा है कि हमारी भाषा को एक नई दिशा देने में आप जैसे लेखकगण तत्पर हैं आपकी अनमोल टिप्पणी एवं मार्गदर्शन के लिए हृदय से आभार प्रकट करता हूँ। शुभकामनाओं सहित ,
      आभार ''एकलव्य"

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  8. Rajesh Kumar Rai3 September 2017 at 21:12

    बहुत सुंदर प्रस्तुति आदरणीय ध्रुव सिंह जी । बहुत खूब ।

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  9. Meena sharma8 September 2017 at 01:26

    Expression of innocent dreams !
    Determination and hardwork make all dream s come true... Though they may take time but they will ! Definitely !!!

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  10. रोली अभिलाषा28 January 2018 at 02:37

    Good one.

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